tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2161870764175544567.post7610629788896867468..comments2023-12-02T00:38:03.848-08:00Comments on Speak & Deliver - A Public Speaking Blog For the Speaking Public: Speaking of ReligionRich Hopkinshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08368395405978270849noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2161870764175544567.post-64446933355501562642011-04-27T13:22:52.076-07:002011-04-27T13:22:52.076-07:00I don't "do" religious speeches, but...I don't "do" religious speeches, but I had a fascinating time in the WCPS competition two years ago field testing an uplifting conclusion.<br /><br />First draft: "If you ever have the great fortune.." fell flat<br /><br />Second draft: "God grants us small miracles.." was judged too "preachy".<br /><br />Third draft: "I'm not the most spiritual person, but I do believe that God in his mercy sometimes grants us small gifts that could rightfully be called 'miracles'...." was a major home run with the secular and religious crowds.Bob Jensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14621163154136771593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2161870764175544567.post-67560502561687990152011-04-25T19:16:25.478-07:002011-04-25T19:16:25.478-07:00My first question would be: How does it benefit th...My first question would be: How does it benefit the audience, or provide value and tools relevant to the topic, to include your personal religious beliefs in the presentation? If they've come to hear a business presentation and you start proselytizing, that will likely alienate some audience members, and not just because they don't share your beliefs, but because that's not the purpose of the presentation. <br /><br />However, if you are merely expressing your own belief or practice ("I prayed about it..."), then I would not find that inappropriate, as it's just a sneak peek into your life, and audiences generally are interested in some personal details about a speaker.<br /><br />Even a Bible story wouldn't offend me if it's presented like any other allegory or example that makes a point -- and if the stories are varied and not all from a religious viewpoint.<br /><br />Different kinds of presentations allow for different kinds of personal expression, as well. A motivational speech, an educational training, and a sales presentation are three different animals entirely.<br /><br />Whether or not it's "PC" or "tolerant" (two terms that I despise because of their primary use to mock true respect for and acceptance of differences) to talk about religion in a presentation has less to do with potential offense than whether it's appropriate for the topic and audience.<br /><br />When I attend *any* presentation where the speaker makes generalizations or assumptions about the audience (everyone is a beginner, everyone has read his book, everyone understands his jargon and acronyms), I find it annoying and insulting.<br /><br />As a Jewish atheist (and I don't say this every day!), I would find it equally annoying and insulting for a speaker to assume everyone in the room is Christian.<br /><br />Lastly, I would think twice about using the word "persecution" to describe someone not wanting to hire you because your presentations are too religious. It just means that you haven't found the right audience, not that you are being systematically mistreated, harassed or subjugated by a larger group because of your beliefs. Jews know a thing or two about persecution. ;-)Lisa Braithwaitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10203279973932837403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2161870764175544567.post-51855673737804748532011-04-25T16:08:20.227-07:002011-04-25T16:08:20.227-07:00Sometimes just a simple word choice can help. For...Sometimes just a simple word choice can help. For example, I changed a line in my current contest speech from "Sometimes God sends us reminders that we are not alone" to "Sometimes we receive reminders that we are not alone." Makes it more accessible to everyone, even the atheists :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com